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Dean and Hazel

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Dean and Hazel

Beautiful couple
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

hehe, after Razin's commentaries, maybe I'll make my move <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />
well, for the color randomness, when you export for web, you can either convert the color space to working SRGB or 'save for web', mine here looks yellowish, but pretty fine, but take note that the color balance for the first differs too much from the rest. Consistency is important.

I think, the crops might be a little tight, although I'm perfectly alright with the idea of face-slicing, which alot of people still find it hard to, given a black border, it seems even tighter, a little hard to breath, which would really affect the overall consumer experience, I would encourage the bars on the edges to be thicker and the ones in between to be much thinner, say 0.5-1point?

Photography wise, I think its great, though I can't say what focal lengths were used due to the extensive crops, but I would say that you've taken notice on using the proper tools for the right subjects. I'm very annoyed whenever I see photographers shooting weddings with a 24-70 throughout.

Last but not least, should this appear in their wedding album, you should really do something about it.
Not to worry, after a few more runs, you should be able to achieve better results.

Cheers my friend!

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="31" height="19" alt=":ahoy:" title="Ahooooy Matey!" />
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